Nice story and music let down by the visuals
First of all I'm sorry I haven't scored it a nine or ten like everyone else, but I would prefer to be hones than liked by the rest of the reviewers. The story was great and the sound compliented the story nicely, but the visuals seemed very sloppy in places, possibly due to the short time it took you make this animation. If the animation and style were worked on more and made more clear then I would have given you a ten or at least a nine, but I can't reward it with that kind of score in the state it is now. I hope my comments don't stop you from making more flash animation because you have shown you have talent that could take you to the top of portal if you just make your work look more polished.